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This isn't too bad. I kind of like your style and I think that you could definitely make a series out of this with a bit of refinement.

The animation was good for the most part, but felt a little stiff at times (mostly the movement of papers). I liked the way you animated the cigarette. The movement of the cigarette was probably one of if not the most fluid moving thing here. (it did still feel a tad bit choppy though)

The facial expressions of papers were definitely good. I like how you managed to show how sad he was while still making it clear that he is an optimistic person. The lip sinc was decent as well, but I thought that the shapes his mouth made didn't always look right if you get what I mean. Like... His mouth looked like he was saying something different than what he was really saying.

The audio was good for the most part but, like the description says, squeakonia definitely has to go. I found it really annoying the first time I watched this. It wasn't so bad the second time, but it still bothered me. I liked the angry voice of the second dollar that papers had stolen from him. Its voice managed to be both funny and suiting. Papers had a great voice too. He sounded optimistic, yet broken and sad as well. Actually, he sounds like Bob from The Oblongs. Subtitles when the landlord was talking would've been nice too, but I was able to understand him, so no big deal.

Surn responds:

As requested, here's the rest of your review that you sent me:

"The backgrounds were nice as well. The background when Papers got mugged was decent but I really liked the Background aroung his home.

Overall, I reallly liked this for the most partand I definitely thik you should continue this.

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Also, while this did have a couple of slightly funny moments, I don't think it would count as a comedy movie in its current state. Too sad."

So, like several others, you would seem to agree that the overall work could use refinement and it's too depressing. I'm glad you enjoyed my cartoon, Thanks for your input.

Good job.

The animation in that was really good, it was definitely an improvement from your TF 2 lip sinc test, but don't know how much effort you put into that, so it might be an unfair comparison. Still, good job on the animation. How long have you animated?

I did notice an error or two though. First, right before that guy ran off the cliff at the end of the first part, he turned white for a second. Not a big deal, but just something I happened to notice. The other thing I noticed (although it was more likely intentional than an error) was how the arm of the guy holding the lamp was contorted in an awkward position when he got that "dramatic look" on his face.

On another good note, I think you did a really good job with the scene transitions. There is a really smooth transition between the games.

Lastly, I like how you put a heavy (pun not really intended) emotional feel of sacrifice on the Tean Fortress 2 part. I never really think much of people dying in front of me (or blowing up Medics and/or Heavies) but tou almost made me feel bad.

Overall, you're pretty good at this and I'll be sure to watch your stuff in the future! Great work!

probinsyANNA responds:

First of all, thank you for another helpful review. I did this about 4 or 5 days.

The first error you saw was intended to some sort of "opposite" perspective where the first guy is shaded white before he escapes for his life, and alex mercer as the last guy is shaded black where he failed to escape and fell to his death.

the second one was also intended to have a little distorted humour with his arm just to fit it with "that" meme face.

Wow. That was actually really good.

The animation was really good. I kind of wish it was in color, but it was still good.

The humor was actually decent as well and I think you did a good job of stitching the voice clips together without sounding weird. The lip sinc to the voices was really good as well and I think you can do some amazing things in the future.

I like how you made the red spy drive him to the doctor like he was his father. Great reference to the meet the spy video.

Overall, good video. I'm actually really impressed with the quality of this submission!

probinsyANNA responds:

Thank you very much T^T no one has ever reviewed my work like yours.

It is really different here in new grounds. keep up on being a good critique over work of others. I really appreciate every word you have stated.

Amazing.

That was great. Animation, story, all of that stuff. Especially for your first flash.

I started out thinking the date part was kind of sweet, then I wondered what was going on with Orange clock. (and the others) I soon started understanding both stories, but wondering how they were connected.

I can't believe it, but I kinda jumped when I realized that the bullet was going to hit Orang Clock and I actually felt bad.

When I saw the picture in his hat, I got a little angry and shocked inside and then felt pissed at Balloon Clock (I think she was a balloon.)

In the end, I saw that this video actuallly had some slightly deeper meaning and I applaud you for managing to stir up my emotions a bit through the internet. Good job.

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CheeseSteakClock responds:

He knew it was a cat not orange clock.

Hmm...

That wasn't too bad.

I don't know what it is, but that music always makes me want to bob my head to it, I just like that song for some reason.

I like the basic Idea for this video and thought you did a good job of making it into a clock flash and the animation is good too. (there isn't really much animation, but whatever)

All in all, not bad for a clock flash and it leaves me wondering- Where the hell is Blob Clock?

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PatriotClock responds:

come home blob, we miss you :(

Hmm...

I think you guys are about equal when it comes to the basic animation, but I'm gonna have to give this one to Ellvis for the extra stuff he put in on his guy.
You are both pretty amazing though, don't get me wrong.

Ellvis responds:

Oh, thanks :D

Funny.

I'm a brony and I thought this was pretty funny. (as long as you stay away from Fluttershy) Anyways, I like your animation style since it isn't a pain to look at and it's pretty fluid. The voice work was also pretty good and I like the flash as a whole. Keep up the good work!

PatoLarax responds:

Do not worry, if for some reason I don't put the main characters of the Tv Show, was to avoid offenses.
Thanks for your rewiew...

Just some shithead.

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