shrimpchris's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Papers]

This isn't too bad. I kind of like your style and I think that you could definitely make a series out of this with a bit of refinement.

The animation was good for the most part, but felt a little stiff at times (mostly the movement of papers). I liked the way you animated the cigarette. The movement of the cigarette was probably one of if not the most fluid moving thing here. (it did still feel a tad bit choppy though)

The facial expressions of papers were definitely good. I like how you managed to show how sad he was while still making it clear that he is an optimistic person. The lip sinc was decent as well, but I thought that the shapes his mouth made didn't always look right if you get what I mean. Like... His mouth looked like he was saying something different than what he was really saying.

The audio was good for the most part but, like the description says, squeakonia definitely has to go. I found it really annoying the first time I watched this. It wasn't so bad the second time, but it still bothered me. I liked the angry voice of the second dollar that papers had stolen from him. Its voice managed to be both funny and suiting. Papers had a great voice too. He sounded optimistic, yet broken and sad as well. Actually, he sounds like Bob from The Oblongs. Subtitles when the landlord was talking would've been nice too, but I was able to understand him, so no big deal.

Surn responds:

As requested, here's the rest of your review that you sent me:

"The backgrounds were nice as well. The background when Papers got mugged was decent but I really liked the Background aroung his home.

Overall, I reallly liked this for the most partand I definitely thik you should continue this.

<Review Request Club>

Also, while this did have a couple of slightly funny moments, I don't think it would count as a comedy movie in its current state. Too sad."

So, like several others, you would seem to agree that the overall work could use refinement and it's too depressing. I'm glad you enjoyed my cartoon, Thanks for your input.

[Scout is sick]

Wow. That was actually really good.

The animation was really good. I kind of wish it was in color, but it was still good.

The humor was actually decent as well and I think you did a good job of stitching the voice clips together without sounding weird. The lip sinc to the voices was really good as well and I think you can do some amazing things in the future.

I like how you made the red spy drive him to the doctor like he was his father. Great reference to the meet the spy video.

Overall, good video. I'm actually really impressed with the quality of this submission!

probinsyANNA responds:

Thank you very much T^T no one has ever reviewed my work like yours.

It is really different here in new grounds. keep up on being a good critique over work of others. I really appreciate every word you have stated.

[MD: Ellvis vs. JeffBee]

Hmm...

I think you guys are about equal when it comes to the basic animation, but I'm gonna have to give this one to Ellvis for the extra stuff he put in on his guy.
You are both pretty amazing though, don't get me wrong.

Ellvis responds:

Oh, thanks :D

[Left 4 Ponies]

Funny.

I'm a brony and I thought this was pretty funny. (as long as you stay away from Fluttershy) Anyways, I like your animation style since it isn't a pain to look at and it's pretty fluid. The voice work was also pretty good and I like the flash as a whole. Keep up the good work!

PatoLarax responds:

Do not worry, if for some reason I don't put the main characters of the Tv Show, was to avoid offenses.
Thanks for your rewiew...